SLOP DETECTOR

The 40 tells · Shape and punctuation · No. 36

Three adjectives in a row in your writing: why readers notice

Smell Possible triad

"Fast, simple, and secure." Lists of three neat words are a habit of machine-written copy. The rhythm sounds finished, so the writer stops before saying anything specific.

Keep the one adjective you can prove, and prove it. Two specific claims beat three general ones.

Before

Our service is fast, reliable, and affordable.

After

Most repairs are done the same day, and the price is fixed before the work starts.

The fix

Keep the one you can prove.

What the checker matches

A pattern match. In plain terms: possible triad.

\b(\w+), (\w+),? and (\w+)\b(?=[.!])

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