SLOP DETECTOR

The 40 tells · Shape and punctuation · No. 37

Exclamation marks in your writing: why readers notice

Smell Exclamation marks

One exclamation mark can be excitement. Five on a page sounds like shouting, and readers start to distrust the page. Generated marketing copy is full of them, especially in calls to action.

Let the offer be exciting on its own terms. One per page is plenty.

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The fix

One per page, at most.

What the checker matches

Every exclamation mark, once a text has more than one.

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