SLOP DETECTOR

The 40 tells · Phrases · No. 30

"More than just": why it reads as machine-written

Flagged "More than just X"

"More than just a gym" and "more than a product" try to lift the thing above its category. The reader is left wondering what it is, then.

Usually there is a specific extra the writer had in mind. Name it.

Before

We're more than just a bakery.

After

A bakery that also runs a Saturday bread class, eight people at a time.

The fix

Say what it is, and what the extra is.

What the checker matches

A pattern match. In plain terms: "more than just x".

\bmore than (just )?(a |an )?[a-z]+(?: [a-z]+)?[.,]

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